Tuesday, November 9th: Writing Workshop on Improving Analysis

Deadlines

DUE DATES- ON TIME​​​​

1. Rough draft for peer critique. DUE: START of class, Tue. 11/9
2. Revised rough draft for Ashley DUE: END of Class, Thursday, 11/11. (see requirements for submission below)

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DUE DATES- LATE (-10%)

1. Outline

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Starter: Writing Workshop on ANALYSIS

The "A" of TEA paragraphs is often the hardest part! Today's writing workshop is going to help you improve your analysis in your essays.  This is a starter, but it also an assignment. Please go to google classroom to find the assignment.

EXCEPTION: If you are writing a NARRATIVE essay, please use the handout indicated for that in the google classroom assignment.

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Announcements

1. Send your essay to one of the volunteer peer editors this week if you'd like help with proofreading! (catching typos, run-on sentences, etc). Choose whichever student editor you feel comfortable sharing your essay with.
2. PEER EDITORS:  To document your editing to receive extra credit, please screenshot all of the drafts you edit WITH YOUR suggestions/comments.  Email me in ONE EMAIL all those screenshots and indicate which students' essays you proofread.
3. NARRATIVE ESSAY students-- Here is the RUBRIC for this essay AND you DO need to integrate evidence from  outside sources related to socialization and have some paragraphs that are more traditional TEA paragraphs.....

Critique Schedule for this Week

1. Monday- Quick Critiques
2. Tuesday- Refining the A in TEA (analysis)
3. Wednesday- Citing sources and introducing quotes
4. Thursday-Proofreading!  Due at end of class today!
5. Friday- Erin Skyles is here to work with you all on mental health awareness. No project work time!

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Work Time

1. Conference with Ashley (remember, I need to conference with everyone on their draft before Thanksgiving break)
2. Finish your shifty first draft by tomorrow, start of class.
3. EMAIL your draft document to me when it is completed for an on-time completion grade. 

• IF you have an extension, please still share the document with me AND include a message explaining your extension reasons and therefore reminding me that you have an extension.  Include WHEN your draft is due based on your extension.

        3. Work on your mask if your essay is done